Kay's five links

Pearl harbor

I pretty like the way how the author describe on details. Such as when danny had been caught by japanese soilder and after that rafe tried to escape him. as well as the plots are very compacted. Very curious whats gonna happened in the end. also make me  easily to imagine the scene when i read them. The imagine present is very strong. in other hand,  author didnt use compliate vocabs, so they are easier to comprehend.

How deep is the ocean

What a impressive fanfiction. Author is very good at describing every movement on details as let me just could follow of her every single words to image. The images easily appeared inside of my head.  Author using casual language type to narrate for the whole story which is very relaxed. When I started reading this story, I also started curious about the ending. Author tried to make a story that totally different with the origional story which is very realistic but just a bit bored.

Frozen

I was always telling myself that jack was not dead. He would just coma to the drift to the ocean. This fanfiction made me more sure of my thought. This fanfiction is quite short but pretty consentrate to narrate what author excatly want to express. I think almost audience wouldnt like to see rose and jack separted. So author aimed to show the audience that jack could be awake as he can get the power by rose's love. After the sailor helped him, he decided to back to ocean to meet rose again...... it will have been a moment to savour.

Black Swan

First of all, i would say i love this movie. But i felt sad about the movie ending. This fanfiction is cheerful and hopeful.  When i read this fanfiction im reading  a drama script. Author naturely describing the conversation between every each characters, very image. The ending shocked me again..... still darkenss and revengeful..

Hangover

The writer was rather good at describing of the character's mentality. The storyline was good but not that surpised. some of sentences are quite long but easy to understand which is good. The origional movie is very funny. but this fanfiction is romance sense. nice try.